Transform your writing into something other writers want to imitate (in only 3 days)

What do all of the greatest writers in the world have in common?

It's not their writing style...

It's not the way they generate ideas...

It's not what music they listen to as they write...

Or whether they sit down at their desk in the morning or at night...

The one thing that all great writers have in common is that they seek feedback on their drafts.

• Stephen King still sends early drafts to trusted friends
• Virginia Woolf used to circulate unpolished manuscripts among friends and fellow writers
• And Paul Graham always lists feedback-givers at the bottom of his essays

Why?

Because writing is hard, even for the best:

Getting fresh eyeballs on your work helps sharpen your ideas and refine your writing. It can also stop you from publishing writing that... well, isn't your best.

When Morgan Housel started writing The Psychology of Money, book-writing was unfamiliar to him. He was more comfortable writing 1500-word blog posts than full-length book chapters.

Yet he felt he had to write long chapters because it's expected in a book. So he drafted two 6,000-word chapters and sent them to friends for feedback.

But the response was underwhelming.

"This doesn't sound like you."

"You're waffling on. Get to the point."

So Housel scrapped those chapters and instead wrote 20, 1500-word chapters. He listened to the feedback and did what he was good at.

Since then, The Psychology of Money has sold more than 4 million copies. FOUR MILLION!

Now imagine if he didn't ask for feedback.

Because the truth is, it's impossible to identify the weak sentences or paragraphs in your drafts when you've read it 20 times.

Everything becomes word soup after a while. And then editing becomes harder than trying to fold up a fitted sheet.

It's not enough to have great ideas. You need to be able to communicate your ideas in a way that people will understand and resonate with.

You know what you're trying to say, but will your reader? How can you possibly know this before publishing that piece you've been working on for ages?

Most writers don't ask for feedback before hitting publish (if you're still reading this, you're probably one of them).

I'm sure you have valid reasons to resist sharing your drafts with people.

Maybe you don't have access to people you trust to provide quality feedback on your writing.

Sure, there are writing groups that offer this. But they're usually more of a boot camp, requiring you to spend hours daily pumping out drafts and sitting through live zoom calls.

Not to mention they can cost hundreds or thousands of dollars.

Unless you're earning big bucks and pumping out articles or blog posts multiple times a week, this doesn't make sense.

Or maybe what's holding you back is the vulnerability of sharing unpolished work with someone else.

I get it. Sharing an imperfect draft is worse than those nightmares where you're somehow back at school and then BAM! you're naked.

But every writer feels like this when they share their work. Writing is vulnerable.

So the real question is this: Do you want to publish your best work? Something you can be really proud of?

Okay, okay... I've made my point. Feedback is crucial to publishing great writing.

So how can I help you improve up your writing in only 3 days?

Here's exactly how this service works:

You send me a link to your draft and I'll provide an enormous amount of feedback.

I'll tell you:

• What you crushed overall (because we all need a cheerleader)
• What you can improve overall (because we also need tough love)
• And line-by-line feedback (so nothing slips through the cracks)

On top of this, I'll be available for follow-up questions via email.

Now I know what you're thinking, you've never seen a service like this before.

So to put your mind at ease, here're some responses I've personally received to the feedback I've given to other writers (this is part of a private writing group, which is why I've redacted names):

And because I put a TON of effort into giving people the highest goddamn quality feedback possible, I only accept 3 drafts per week.

So if this tickles your fancy, here's what you need to do:

1. Click on the box to the right-hand side of the screen (or below for mobile) that corresponds to the length of your draft (or choose ASAP if you need this done within 24 hours).
2. Click "I want this!"
3. Fill out the payment details (Gumroad automatically adds a 20% tip to your purchase, so be sure to change this so there aren't any surprises)
4. Click "Pay" (Note: 50% is charged immediately and the other 50% once I send you my feedback).
5. You'll then be emailed a receipt and get redirected to the product page where you can drop a link to your draft and add any additional notes.
6. Once you do this, I'll dig into your draft and return it to you within 3 days (sooner if you select ASAP)

Let's make this the best thing you've ever written!

Got a question?

P.S. I'll edit your work faster if you add a tip...